I observed the leprechaun, in jail
I remember the leprechaun getting closer
I looked in my Grandma’s eyes
The leprechaun pulled out a knife
Why did I follow my Grandma
The leprechaun did an Irish dance
Tuesday, March 3, 2020
My Suspicious Sesting l NZ Writing
Kia ora Bloggers and welcome back to my blog, Did you play any sports in the weekend? I did, I had marching canterbury competition, and I and my team came 2nd out of 6 marching teams. Anyway in literacy this week we had to create a poem about a holiday that we have been on or not been on, it had to be six words, and six lines. Here it is:
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Hi Jessica,
ReplyDeleteI like how you did what sport you do and that would of been fun to do and good job.
Maybe next time you could add a bit more descriptive words to make it a little more interesting.
Other than that it looks really good keep up the good work.
From Jessi